Self-Evaluation: 12/11/19

Ethos:

Do you cite and quote your sources appropriately?

Yes, I made sure that every source I used throughout my paper was cited properly. One way I made sure to do this correctly was by asking my peers and professor for help and feedback on my citations. I also made sure to use a lot of credible sources in my paper in order to make my argument stronger.

Do you introduce their credibility before citing evidence and claims from them?

Yes, every time I was about to intruduce evidence that was from a credible source I made sure to introduce the source before stating the evidence.

Are all of your sources credible?

Yes I believe all my sources are credible. I made sure to look at scholarly articles that came from a credible institution or organization. I did this by looking for sources through the Pima Library database and making sure that the authors were credible.

Logos:

Is your solution practical and specific?

Yes I believe that my solution is particle. This is due to it being too educate ourselves and others on the issue of marijuana legalization and its medical benefits. As a way to end marijuana stigma and persuade others who oppose the issue. My solution is specific when it comes to contacting local lawmakers and informing them that their voters are in favor of the legalization of marijuana.

Does the order of your paper logically (and persuasively) move from one idea to the next? 

Yes, I think that my paper makes logical sense in how I move from one idea to the next. This is mainly due to me following the outline I made for myself and also following my peers and professors suggestions to make my paper better. I believe that my paper follows the basic outline of a research paper and makes logical sense.

Do you avoid fallacies and contradictions?

Yes I do not believe that I have any fallacies in my paper. I also made it a point to bring up opposing views and disprove them by providing the reader credible evidence. I also do not believe that I used overly emotional language and remained logical throughout the paper.

Pathos:

Do you appeal directly to your classmates with a call to action they could participate in?

Yes, my call to action is something every single one of my classmates can participate in if they are passionate about the issue. I also feel like a provided some good example for my classmates as ways they can contact local lawmakers which is something most people don’t know how to do.

Do you help your audiences feel empowered (and not overly guilty or sad, for example)?

I think that my call is action is empowering because as voters we really hold a lot of power. By bringing more attention to the issue and contacting local lawmakers we can actually make a change. This is empowering because we hold my sway in government then we think we do.

Do you appeal to shared values you have in common with your audience(s)? Which ones?

I think the main value I appeal to is health. My paper is mainly about medication and being healthy. It just so happens that the medication is marijuana. However I provided many examples as why marijuana is medication.

Thoughts on Essay 3

I thought is was the most difficult essay we did this semester however I really believe this essay helped me grow as a writer. I am passionate about this issue and writing about it is exciting.

Thoughts on the Class

I really loved it. I learned so much and I feel like I was offered all the help I needed and even more. My teacher was great and I think that I improved a lot over the semester.



Essay 3: 12/10/19

A Better Alternative

According to the National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA), more than 130 people die every day from opioid-related overdoses. Opioids truly took our country by storm in the 1990’s, when doctors began prescribing opioid pain relievers under the notion that they were not addictive. However, that notion was false and led to misuse of the medication and an increase in overdoses all across America. According to the NIDA, a study done in 2017 estimated that 1.7 million people in the United States suffer from a substance abuse disorder caused by a prescription opioid pain reliever. What if there was a better alternative? Marijuana has been effectively used to treat chronic pain as well as other ailments without the addictive side effects we see in other medications like opioids. However, for the longest time, marijuana has been seen as a dangerous narcotic. Even today the federal government still classifies marijuana as a schedule-one drug instead of medication that can help millions as a safe and nonaddictive alternative to the extremely addictive opioid painkillers. 

Marijuana comes from the cannabis plant called cannabis sativa which can be found growing in tropical and temperate environments around the world. The main active ingredients found in marijuana are THC and CBD, both of which react differently to the body, producing differing effects. THC is the psychoactive compound found in marijuana which can have effects such as euphoria. According to the National Center for Biotechnology Information (NCBI), THC has been found to eliminate extreme nausea found in patients going through chemotherapy (“Marijuana and Cancer”). Patients reported finding relief with just a low dose of THC and this can change their life, making it possible for them to eat again and gain weight as well as relieve the constant pain that they feel (“Marijuana and Cancer”). 

CBD is not psychoactive and instead binds with CB1 and CB2 receptors found throughout our bodies that deal with our coordination, movement, thinking, memory, appetite, pain, and other functions. However, since CBD lacks the psychoactive aspect found in THC, it reacts to the body differently. According to Medical News Today, this is done by CBD attaching to these receptors and directing the body to use its own cannabinoids found naturally within (“How CBD Works”). Just recently the FDA approved a cannabidiol oral solution for the treatment of seizures found in two forms of epilepsy (Commissioner, Office of the FDA). According to the NCBI, CBD has also been used to treat Parkinson’s disease, Crohn’s disease, and many other conditions (“Cannabinoids in Health and Disease”). Over the years we have seen over-the-counter medication being used to relieve stiffness and chronic pain, however, according to the NCBI, many people now believe that CBD is a better alternative due to its ability to inhibit inflammatory and neuropathic pain, which are actually two of the hardest chronic pain conditions to treat. On the other hand, according to the Epilepsy Foundation, CBD has also been known to reduce seizure activity in children with some of the worst childhood epilepsy syndromes. In some cases, it’s reported that the seizure activity stopped altogether (Shafer). This is a huge leap in the medical community due to most anti-seizure medications not typically working on these patients. However, unlike marijuana, CBD is legal. According to an article written by PBS, CBD is legal in the United States due to it having no psychoactive effects as well as many proven health benefits. Also, the article states that this is due to more research being done on CBD then marijuana. However just like CBD, THC has also been known to have some great effects on people suffering from various ailments, meaning that many patients don’t have access to medication, cannabis, that can really help them because it is not legal across the United States and which results in many people suffering from something that they wouldn’t have to if they had legal access to it. Marijuana is currently only legal in 33 states (“Legal Medical Marijuana States”), meaning 17 states in the U.S. still see marijuana as a harmful drug. 

Marijuana is also being used to treat Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) in patients. According to Healthcare in America, researchers have found that marijuana can help with relieving the traumatic memories as well as nightmares found in most PTSD patients (“Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD”). A recent study done by the NYU Langone Medical Center revealed that PTSD patients have much lower levels of a neurotransmitter called anandamide (“Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD”). Anandamide is a natural antidepressant found in the brain and works similar to the way cannabis does in our body; a lot of patients found greater relief from their symptoms using cannabis than they did taking antidepressants. Marijuana also has been found to reduce or stop nightmares that frequent PTSD patients (“Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD”). This is through cannabis reducing Rapid Eye Movement sleep (REM) ,which is when these intense nightmares occur. Cannabis allows for the body to remain in the deep sleep state longer, which is where the least amount of dreams occur. Patients reported having their nightmares gone or drastically reduced after being treated with cannabis. 

However, for a long time, a negative stigma has been associated with the drug and those who use it. PBS writes in an article “Marijuana Timeline” that this is mainly due to its association with the lower class and Mexican immigrants. It states that after the Mexican Revolution, when thousands of immigrants came to the United States, “Fear and prejudice about the Spanish-speaking newcomers became associated with marijuana.” Therefore, when understanding the bad reputation around marijuana, we might conclude that it came from a deeply-rooted prejudice held against Mexican immigrants. The article later states, “Anti-drug campaigners warned against the encroaching ‘Marijuana Menace,’ and terrible crimes were attributed to marijuana and the Mexicans who used it” (“Marijuana Timeline”). This is a great example of anti-drug advocates’ diversion away from the actual effects of the drug in their attempts to eliminate it all together. These advocates instead used the prejudice held against Mexican immigrants along with the association of marijuana as a way to sway the public’s opinion about the drug. 

When looking at other stigmas surrounding marijuana, the topic of addiction always comes up. Marijuana is not known for having any physical addictive properties. However, according to the American Addiction Center, constant use of marijuana can lead to a psychological dependency. The National Institute on Drug Abuse states that roughly 9% of marijuana users develop a psychological dependency. The article also says, “The presence of tolerance or dependence/withdrawal is not enough to make a diagnosis of marijuana addiction (for instance, not everyone who develops some amount of dependence to marijuana will necessarily begin to compulsively use it)” (American Addiction Center). This is important because there is a false stigma that marijuana is inherently addictive. However, when looking at opioid addiction, we see that 20-30% of people prescribed opioids misuse them and develop a physical dependency according to the Addiction Center (“Statistics on Opioid Addiction and Abuse”). This is important because far more people prescribed opioids develop an addiction/dependency then people using marijuana, legally or illegally. This is based on the fact that opioids are far more physically addictive to the human body than marijuana is. According to the same article from the Addiction Center, around 130 Americans die every day from an opioid overdose, whereas a marijuana overdose is almost unheard of. Yet even today doctors are still prescribing patients these highly addictive and dangerous opioids which leads to higher rates of misuse and overdoses in America. 

One step towards making marijuana legal across the U.S. is by educating ourselves and others on the issue. By doing this we are able to create a dialogue in which we can address the stigmas and misconceptions of marijuana and inform the general public of its medical benefits. This would make it more likely to convince others who oppose the issue. The next step would then be to contact lawmakers and inform them that their voters are in support of the legalization of marijuana. One way to do this is by going to city hall meetings, community events, and town halls to network and meet other people who are passionate about the issue. The more attention that is brought to the issue of marijuana legalization, the better our chance that lawmakers will notice and be forced to take action. 

Works Cited

“Addiction Statistics – Facts on Drug and Alcohol Use – Addiction Center.” AddictionCenter, www.addictioncenter.com/addiction/addiction-statistics/.

Akpan, Nsikan, and Jamie Leventhal. “Is CBD Legal? Here’s What You Need to Know, According to Science.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, 12 July 2019, www.pbs.org/newshour/science/is-cbd-legal-heres-what-you-need-to-know-according-to-science.

“Brain-Imaging Study Links Cannabinoid Receptors to Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder: First Pharmaceutical Treatment for PTSD within Reach.” ScienceDaily, ScienceDaily, 14 May 2013, www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2013/05/130514085016.htm.

Commissioner, Office of the. “FDA Approves First Drug Comprised of an Active Ingredient Derived from Marijuana to Treat Rare, Severe Forms of Epilepsy.” U.S. Food and Drug Administration, FDA, www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/fda-approves-first-drug-comprised-active-ingredient-derived-marijuana-treat-rare-severe-forms.

Fraser, George A. “The Use of a Synthetic Cannabinoid in the Management of Treatment-Resistant Nightmares in Posttraumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD).” CNS Neuroscience & Therapeutics, Blackwell Publishing Ltd, 2009, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19228182.

Grinspoon, Peter. “Cannabidiol (CBD) – What We Know and What We Don’t.” Harvard Health Blog, 27 Aug. 2019, www.health.harvard.edu/blog/cannabidiol-cbd-what-we-know-and-what-we-dont-2018082414476.

Johnson, Jon. “CBD Oil: Uses, Health Benefits, and Risks.” Medical News Today, MediLexicon International, 27 July 2018, www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/317221.php.

Kogan, Natalya M, and Raphael Mechoulam. “Cannabinoids in Health and Disease.” Dialogues in Clinical Neuroscience, Les Laboratoires Servier, 2007, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3202504/.

Mack, Alison. “MARIJUANA AND CANCER.” Marijuana as Medicine? The Science Beyond the Controversy., U.S. National Library of Medicine, 1 Jan. 1970, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK224387/.

“Marijuana Timeline | Busted – America’s War On Marijuana | FRONTLINE.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/shows/dope/etc/cron.html.

Moss, Angelique. “Cannabis Could Be the Key to Treating People with PTSD.” Medium, Healthcare in America, 31 Oct. 2018, healthcareinamerica.us/cannabis-key-treating-ptsd-b4abf432215.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Marijuana.” NIDA, www.drugabuse.gov/publications/drugfacts/marijuana.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Opioid Overdose Crisis.” NIDA, 22 Jan. 2019, www.drugabuse.gov/drugs-abuse/opioids/opioid-overdose-crisis.

Shafer, Patricia O., and Elaine KiriakopoulosMDMSc. “Dravet Syndrome.” Epilepsy Foundation, www.epilepsy.com/learn/types-epilepsy-syndromes/dravet-syndrome.

“Legal Medical Marijuana States and DC – Medical Marijuana – ProCon.org.” Medical Marijuana, medicalmarijuana.procon.org/legal-medical-marijuana-states-and-dc/.

Becker, Sam, and Google. “What Can You Do to Get Marijuana Legalized in Your State?” Showbiz Cheat Sheet, 24 Nov. 2017, www.cheatsheet.com/culture/what-do-get-marijuana-legalized-your-state.html/.

In Class Work: 12/5/19

Fallacies Extra Credit

  1. Dogmatism/ Fallacy of Omission
  2. Dogmatism/ Fallacy of Omission
  3. Hasty Generalization
  4. Fallacy of Equivocation
  5. Ad Hominem Arguments
  6. Scare Tactics
  7. Dogmatism/Appeals to False Authority
  8. ?
  9. Faulty Causality
  10. ?
  11. Non Sequitur
  12. Straw Man
  13. Faulty Causality/ Begging the Question
  14. Appeals to False Authority
  15. ?
  16. Slippery Slope
  17. Hasty Generalization
  18. Faulty Causality
  19. Non Sequitur 
  20. Ad Hominem Arguments
  21. Faulty Causality
  22. Appeals to False Authority
  23. ?

In Class Writing: 12/3/19

Claims and Evidence Chart for Essay 3

Thesis: Marijuana has been effectively used to treat chronic pain as well as other ailments without the addictive side effects we see in other medications like opioids.

Claim: THC is medically helpful.

Evidence: According to the National Center for Biotechnology Information (NCBI), THC has been found to eliminate extreme nausea found in patients going through chemotherapy (“Marijuana and Cancer”). Patients reported finding relief with just a low dose of THC and this can change their life, making it possible for them to eat again and gain weight as well as relieve the constant pain that they feel (“Marijuana and Cancer”).

Claim: Marijuana itself is medically helpful.

Evidence: According to Healthcare in America, researchers have found that marijuana can help with relieving the traumatic memories as well as nightmares found in most PTSD patients (“Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD”). A recent study done by the NYU Langone Medical Center revealed that PTSD patients have much lower levels of a neurotransmitter called anandamide (“Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD”). 

Claim: Marijuana is seen as bad due to its association with the lower class and migrants.

Evidence:  It states that after the Mexican Revolution, when thousands of immigrants came to the United States, “Fear and prejudice about the Spanish-speaking newcomers became associated with marijuana.” Therefore, when understanding the bad reputation around marijuana, we might conclude that it came from a deeply-rooted prejudice held against Mexican immigrants. The article later states, “Anti-drug campaigners warned against the encroaching ’Marijuana Menace,’ and terrible crimes were attributed to marijuana and the Mexicans who used it” (“Marijuana Timeline”). 

Claim: Marijuana is less addictive than opioids. 

Evidence:  The article writes, “The presence of tolerance or dependence/withdrawal is not enough to make a diagnosis of marijuana addiction (for instance, not everyone who develops some amount of dependence to marijuana will necessarily begin to compulsively use it)” (Thomas). This is important because there is a false stigma that marijuana is inherently addictive. However, when looking at opioid addiction, we see that 20-30% of people prescribed opioids misuse them and develop a dependency according to the Addiction Center (“Statistics on Opioid Addiction and Abuse”).

HW: 11/27/19

Essay 3 Draft 2

According to the National Institute on Drug Abuse, more than 130 people die every day from opioid-related overdoses (Opioid Crisis). Opioids truly took our country by storm in the 1990’s, when doctors began prescribing opioid pain relievers under the notion that they were not addictive. However, that was false and lead to misuse of the medication and an increase in overdoses all across America. According to the NIH, a study done in 2017 estimated that 1.7 million people in the United States suffer from a substance abuse disorder caused by a prescription opioid pain reliever (Opioid Crisis). What if there was a better alternative? Marijuana has been effectively used to treat chronic pain as well as other ailments without the addictive side effects we see in other medications like opioids. However, for the longest time marijuana has been seen as a dangerous narcotic. Even today the federal government still classifies marijuana as a schedule-one drug instead of medication that can help millions as well a safe and nonaddictive alternative to the extremely addictive opioid painkillers. 

Marijuana comes from the cannabis plant called cannabis sativa. It which can be found growing in tropical and temperate environments around the world. The main active ingredients found in marijuana are THC and CBD, both of which react differently into the body and, produceing differing effects. THC is the psychoactive compound found in marijuana, which can have effects such as euphoria. According to the NCBI (National Center for Biotechnology Information) THC has been found to eliminate extreme nausea found in patients going through chemotherapy (Marijuana and Cancer). Patients reported finding relief with just a low dose of THC and this can change their life, making it possible for them to eat again and gain weight as well as relieve the constant pain that they feel (Marijuana and Cancer). 

CBD is not psychoactive, and instead binds with CB1 and CB2 receptors found throughout our bodies that deal with our coordination, movement, thinking, memory, appetite, pain, and other functions. However since CBD lacks the psychoactive aspect found in THC, it reacts to the body differently. According to Medical News Today, this is done by CBD attaching to these receptors and directing the body to use its own cannabinoids found naturally within (How CBD Works). Just recently the FDA approved a cannabidiol oral solution for the treatment of seizures found in two forms of epilepsy (FDA, Press Release). According to the NCBI, CBD has also been used to treat Parkinson’s disease, Crohn’s disease, and many other conditions (Cannabinoids in Health and Disease). Over the years we have seen over the counter medication being used to relieve stiffness and chronic pain, however, many people now believe that CBD is a better alternative due to its ability to inhibit inflammatory and neuropathic pain, which are actually two of the hardest chronic pain conditions to treat. On the other hand, according to the Epilepsy Foundation CBD has also been known to reduce seizure activity in children with some of the worst childhood epilepsy syndromes (Dravet Syndrome). In some cases it’s reported that the seizure activity stopped altogether (Dravet Syndrome). This is a huge leap in the medical community due to most anti-seizure medications not typically working on these patients. However, unlike marijuana CBD is legal. According to an article written by PBS, CBD is legal in the United States due to it having no psychoactive effects as well as many proven health benefits. Also the article states that this is due to more research being done on CBD then marijuana. However just like CBD, THC has also been known to have some great effects on people suffering from various ailments. Meaning that many patients don’t have access to medication that can really help them because cannabis is not legal across the United States. Which results in many people suffering from something that they wouldn’t have to with the access of cannabis. 

Marijuana is also being used to treat PTSD in patients. According to Healthcare in America, researchers have found that marijuana can help with relieving the traumatic memories as well as nightmares found in most PTSD patients (Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD). A recent study done by the NYU Langone Medical Center revealed that PTSD patients have much lower levels of a neurotransmitter called anandamide (Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD). Anandamide is a natural antidepressant found in the brain and works similar to the way cannabis does in our body; a lot of patients found greater relief from their symptoms using cannabis than they did taking antidepressants. Marijuana also has been found to reduce or stop nightmares that frequent PTSD patients (Cannabis could be the key to treating people with PTSD). This is through cannabis reducing REM sleep which is when these intense nightmares occur. Cannabis allows for the body to remain in the deep sleep state longer, which is where the least amount of dreams occur. Patients reported having their nightmares gone or drastically reduced after being treated with cannabis. 

However, for a long time cannabis has had a negative connotation. PBS writes in an article that this is mainly due to its association with the lower class and mexican immigrants. It states that after the Mexican Revolution when thousands of immigrants came to the United States, “fear and prejudice about the Spanish-speaking newcomers became associated with marijuana” (PBS, Marijuana Timeline). Therefore when understanding the bad reputation around marijuana we have to conclude that it came from a deeply rooted prejudice held against Mexican Immigrants. The article later states, “Anti-drug campaigners warned against the encroaching “Marijuana Menace,” and terrible crimes were attributed to marijuana and the Mexicans who used it” (PBS, Marijuana Timeline). This is a great example of anti-drug advocates’ diversion away from the actual effects of the drug in their attempts to eliminate it all together. These advocates instead used the prejudice held against Mexican Immigrants along with the association of marijuana as a way to sway the public’s opinion about the drug. When looking at other stigmas surrounding marijuana the topic of addiction always comes up. Marijuana is not known for having any physical addictive properties however according to the American Addiction Center, constant use of marijuana can lead to psychological dependency. The article writes, “The presence of tolerance or dependence/withdrawal is not enough to make a diagnosis of marijuana addiction (for instance, not everyone who develops some amount of dependence to marijuana will necessarily begin to compulsively use it)” (Is Marijuana Addictive, Scot Thomas). This is important because there is a false stigma that marijuana is inherently addictive. However when looking at opioid addiction we see that 20-30% of people prescribed opioids misuse them and develop a dependency, this is according to an article published by the Addiction Center (Statistics on Opioid Addiction and Abuse). This is important because far more people prescribed opioids develop an addiction/dependency then people using marijuana illegally. Also according to the same article around 130 Americans die everyday from an opioid overdose, whereas a marijuana overdose is almost unheard of. Yet even today doctors are still prescribing patients the highly addictive and dangerous opioids. Which leads to higher rates of misuse and overdoses in America. 

Works Cited

“Addiction Statistics – Facts on Drug and Alcohol Use – Addiction Center.” AddictionCenter, www.addictioncenter.com/addiction/addiction-statistics/.

Akpan, Nsikan, and Jamie Leventhal. “Is CBD Legal? Here’s What You Need to Know, According to Science.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, 12 July 2019, www.pbs.org/newshour/science/is-cbd-legal-heres-what-you-need-to-know-according-to-science.

“Brain-Imaging Study Links Cannabinoid Receptors to Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder: First Pharmaceutical Treatment for PTSD within Reach.” ScienceDaily, ScienceDaily, 14 May 2013, www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2013/05/130514085016.htm.

Commissioner, Office of the. “FDA Approves First Drug Comprised of an Active Ingredient Derived from Marijuana to Treat Rare, Severe Forms of Epilepsy.” U.S. Food and Drug Administration, FDA, www.fda.gov/news-events/press-announcements/fda-approves-first-drug-comprised-active-ingredient-derived-marijuana-treat-rare-severe-forms.

Fraser, George A. “The Use of a Synthetic Cannabinoid in the Management of Treatment-Resistant Nightmares in Posttraumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD).” CNS Neuroscience & Therapeutics, Blackwell Publishing Ltd, 2009, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19228182.

Grinspoon, Peter. “Cannabidiol (CBD) – What We Know and What We Don’t.” Harvard Health Blog, 27 Aug. 2019, www.health.harvard.edu/blog/cannabidiol-cbd-what-we-know-and-what-we-dont-2018082414476.

Johnson, Jon. “CBD Oil: Uses, Health Benefits, and Risks.” Medical News Today, MediLexicon International, 27 July 2018, www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/317221.php.

Kogan, Natalya M, and Raphael Mechoulam. “Cannabinoids in Health and Disease.” Dialogues in Clinical Neuroscience, Les Laboratoires Servier, 2007, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3202504/.

Mack, Alison. “MARIJUANA AND CANCER.” Marijuana as Medicine? The Science Beyond the Controversy., U.S. National Library of Medicine, 1 Jan. 1970, www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK224387/.

“Marijuana Timeline | Busted – America’s War On Marijuana | FRONTLINE.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/shows/dope/etc/cron.html.

Moss, Angelique. “Cannabis Could Be the Key to Treating People with PTSD.” Medium, Healthcare in America, 31 Oct. 2018, healthcareinamerica.us/cannabis-key-treating-ptsd-b4abf432215.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Marijuana.” NIDA, www.drugabuse.gov/publications/drugfacts/marijuana.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Opioid Overdose Crisis.” NIDA, 22 Jan. 2019, www.drugabuse.gov/drugs-abuse/opioids/opioid-overdose-crisis.

Shafer, Patricia O., and Elaine KiriakopoulosMDMSc. “Dravet Syndrome.” Epilepsy Foundation, www.epilepsy.com/learn/types-epilepsy-syndromes/dravet-syndrome.

In Class Writing: 11/26/19

Incorrect: I didn’t know much about contacting the spirit world, however I wanted to try.

Correct: I didn’t know much about contacting the spirit world, however, I wanted to try.

Rule: Use commas to set off parenthetical expressions that provide additional information that can be easily removed without changing the meaning of the sentence.

Incorrect: I repeated myself and then walked to the light, turning it on, trying to find a reasonable explanation but there wasn’t one. 

Correct: I repeated myself and then walked to the light, turning it on, trying to find a reasonable explanation, but there wasn’t one. 

Rule: Use commas to set off parenthetical expressions that provide additional information that can be easily removed without changing the meaning of the sentence.

Incorrect: Once I made it to the kitchen and successfully got myself some water it was time to walk back to my room, in the dark.

Correct: Once I made it to the kitchen and successfully got myself some water, it was time to walk back to my room, in the dark.

Rule: Use commas to set off parenthetical expressions that provide additional information that can be easily removed without changing the meaning of the sentence.

Essay 3 Draft 1: 11/21/19

The opioid crisis in America is out of control and research shows that more than 130 people die everyday from opioid related overdoses. Opioids truly took our country by storm in the 1990’s, when doctors began prescribing opioid pain relievers, under the notion that they were not addictive. However that was false and lead to misuse of the medication and an increase in overdoses all across America. A study done in 2017 estimated that 1.7 million people in the United States suffer from a substance abuse disorder caused by a prescription opioid pain reliever. But what if there was a better alternative? Marijuana has been used to treat chronic pain as well as other ailments, without the addictive side effects we see in other medications like opioids. However, for the longest time marijuana has been seen as a dangerous narcotic. Even today the Federal Government sees marijuana as a schedule one drug instead of medication that can help millions as well an alternative to the extremely addictive opioid painkillers. 

Marijuana comes from the cannabis plant called cannabis sativa. Which can be found growing in tropical and temperate environments around the world. The main active ingredients found in marijuana is THC and CBD. Both of which react differently to the body, producing diffeing effects. THC is the psychoactive compound found in marijuana which can have effects such as euphoria. However CBD is not psychoactive and instead binds with CB1 receptors found throughout our bodies that deal with our coordination, movement, thinking, memory, appetite, pain, and other functions. Just recently the FDA approved a cannabidiol oral solution for the treatment of seizures found in two forms of epilepsy. CBD has also been used to treat Parkinson’s disease, Crohn’s disease, and many other conditions. Over the years we have seen over the counter medication being used to relieve stiffness and chronic pain, however many people now believe that CBD is a better alternative due to its ability to inhibit inflammatory and neuropathic pain, which are actually two of the hardest chronic pain conditions to treat. On the other hand, CBD has also been known to reduce seizure activity in children with some of the worst childhood epilepsy syndromes. In some cases it’s reported that the seizure activity stopped altogether. This is a huge leap in the medical community due to most anti seizure medications not typically working on these patients. THC has also been found to eliminate extreme nausea found in patients going through chemotherapy. Patients reported finding relief with just a low dose of THC and this can change their life. Making it possible for them to eat again and gain weight as well as relieve the constant pain that they feel. We also see marijuana being used to treat PTSD in patients. They have found that marijuana can help with relieving the traumatic memories as well as nightmares found in most PTSD patients. A recent study done by the NYU Langone Medical Center revealed that PTSD patients have much lower levels of a neurotransmitter called anandamide. Anandamide is a natural antidepressant found in the brain and works similar to the way cannabis does in our body. Meaning a lot of patients find greater relief from their symptoms using cannabis than they do taking antidepressants. It also has been found to reduce or stop nightmares that frequent PTSD patients. This is through cannabis reducing REM sleep which is when these intense nightmares occur. Patients reported having their nightmares gone or drastically reduced after being treated with cannabis. 

Works Cited

“Brain-Imaging Study Links Cannabinoid Receptors to Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder: First Pharmaceutical Treatment for PTSD within Reach.” ScienceDaily, ScienceDaily, 14 May 2013, http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2013/05/130514085016.htm.

Fraser, George A. “The Use of a Synthetic Cannabinoid in the Management of Treatment-Resistant Nightmares in Posttraumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD).” CNS Neuroscience & Therapeutics, Blackwell Publishing Ltd, 2009, http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19228182.

Grinspoon, Peter. “Cannabidiol (CBD) – What We Know and What We Don’t.” Harvard Health Blog, 27 Aug. 2019, http://www.health.harvard.edu/blog/cannabidiol-cbd-what-we-know-and-what-we-dont-2018082414476.

Johnson, Jon. “CBD Oil: Uses, Health Benefits, and Risks.” Medical News Today, MediLexicon International, 27 July 2018, http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/317221.php.

Moss, Angelique. “Cannabis Could Be the Key to Treating People with PTSD.” Medium, Healthcare in America, 31 Oct. 2018, healthcareinamerica.us/cannabis-key-treating-ptsd-b4abf432215.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Marijuana.” NIDA, http://www.drugabuse.gov/publications/drugfacts/marijuana.

National Institute on Drug Abuse. “Opioid Overdose Crisis.” NIDA, 22 Jan. 2019, http://www.drugabuse.gov/drugs-abuse/opioids/opioid-overdose-crisis.

Essay 3 Outline

I. Introductory Paragraph

  • Your thesis:
    • Marijuana isn’t any worse than any other medicine on the market
    • Marijuana is a better alternative than opioids for treating chronic pain

II. Body of your Argument

Background Information

  • What marijuana actually is and its effects on our bodies.
  • Opioid addiction in American vs. weed 
  • How marijuana has been used to help and treat numerous diseases throughout time.

Reasons or Evidence to Support your Claim

1. Claim: Marijuana is a form of medicine that can help with numerous mental and physical diseases. 

Evidence:

  • The chemical compound CBD has been found to reduce seizures in epilepsy patients
  • Used to treat PTSD, OCD, and many more mental disorders
  • Also used to treat chronic pain and help with extreme nausea found in patients going through chemotherapy 

2. Claim: Cannabis is a better alternative for treating chronic pain than opioids.

Evidence:

  • Opioids are highly addictive and are very harmful to the human body
  • Marijuana is not addictive, comes from the Earth, and has less harmful effects on the body then opioids
  • You can overdose on opioids and you can not overdose on marijuana 
  • Stop the opioid crisis by prescribing marijuana instead of addictive unnatural drugs 

3. Claim: Marijuana can have amazing effects and stop constant seizures found in patients with epilepsy

 Evidence:

  • There has been a lot of research and proof that this actually does stop seizure activity in the brain

III. Addressing the Opposite Side

A. 1st Opposing View: Mrijuana is a gateway drug.

Refutation: 

  • Marijuana is not addictive (Research has been done to support this claim) 
  • Marijuana is not on the same level as heroin or meth

B. 2nd Opposing View: Marijuana is more harmful than it is helpful.

Refutation:

  • It has helped so many people
  • No one has died from using marijuana

IV. Conclusion

  • Marijuana is good!

In Class Writing: 11/13/19

Parts of an Argument

Claim: Marijuana should be legal in all U.S. states for recreational and medical use.

Grounds: This is because marijuana should be more accessible to people who use it to treat certain medical conditions as well as the general public. This is because marijuana helps more people than it hurts.

Warrant: Everyone should be able to have access to medicine (marijuana) that can help them. Also people should not be punished for possession of marijuana.

Backing: Too many people don’t have access to marijuana and people who do sometimes have to obtain it illegally. So I believe people should not have to be in pain or put themselves in a dangerous situation in order to obtain marijuana.