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Kristof was able to create a compelling argument through his use of ethos, pathos, and logos. Kristof used his knowlege and background of the death penalty to give himself more credibilty with the reader as well as including passionate and emotional stories of real people to pull at the readers’ heartstrings. Also Kristof’s use of facts throughout his article provides evidence that ultimately backs up his claims. Beforing reading this article I was for the death penalty, however after reading my opinion has changed. This was due to Kristof being able to present evidence that ultimately persuaded. His article is powerful because it does hold the power to change opinions which can in turn change the way someone may vote which can evoke actual change. 

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Published by chloemaki

Chloe Maki is starting her first semester at Pima Community College where she is exploring multiply areas of study. Although her major is business, she is open to other fields of study. Chloe does however plan to pursue some type of future in the criminal justice system or criminal psychology. Chloe has a passion for psychology and understanding the human brain.

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